Showing posts with label zappai. Show all posts
Showing posts with label zappai. Show all posts

Friday, September 6, 2024

On Haiku

A haiku—an English-language haiku, that is—need not, and probably should not, have seventeen syllables. ‘Syllable’ is a misunderstanding of the Japanese ‘on,’ a unit that is often shorter than a syllable. If we insist on the five-seven-five syllable structure, our poem may well end up longer than a haiku in Japanese. Twelve or thirteen syllables will tend to be closer in length to a Japanese-language haiku.

A ‘true’ haiku should contain references to nature and a season. It should not include any explicit metaphors. If it does not fit these criteria, it is some related form, such as senryu or zappai. All these descend from haikai, which in turn derived from the linked poetry known as renga (which also is ancestral to the tanka form).

I rarely pen a haiku in the strict sense. Senryu and related forms, yes, though I may or may not use the seventeen syllable structure. Definitely not more than seventeen!

Monday, April 29, 2024

Sparks and More

 Three short poems:

 

I watch sparks fly
from the relentless wheels
of the universe

sometimes I stand too close
and pretend they are aimed at me

Stephen Brooke ©2024

 

the moon and the sea
reach ever toward each other
yet may not embrace

Stephen Brooke ©2024


lesser of evils~
life is a succession
of such choices

Stephen Brooke ©2024

Sunday, March 31, 2024

Two More Zappai

a moment that should

have lasted forever

has come and gone

(note: this is not totally original but a line from a T’ang Dynasty poem rephrased as a senryu)


time turned upside down

the hours spilling on the floor

who will sweep them up?


Stephen Brooke ©2024

Sunday, March 10, 2024

three zappai

right may well be right

and wrong is certainly wrong

who says which is which?

 

success and failure

are but stops along the road

the journey goes on

 

to believe in good

is no more logical than

to believe in god

 

Stephen Brooke ©2024

 

zappai is a catch-all name for poems written in the form of haiku and senryu